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Post by jjrev609 on Aug 25, 2008 11:44:12 GMT -5
Alright still gotta fill up three more slots but for the most part I'll be starting sometime next week, preferably around Wednesday or the end of the week. I'll be making my npcs and I've decided just to start with a mission instead of a LOG for those who were expecting one, because i was gonna cause quite a bit of confusion to myself and you guys if I did one. So i guess this'll serve as roll call until we're all ready
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Post by Benry on Aug 25, 2008 12:11:30 GMT -5
Alright still gotta fill up three more sluts way to go stallion!
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Post by jjrev609 on Aug 25, 2008 13:03:48 GMT -5
Alright still gotta fill up three more sluts way to go stallion!
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Post by ®onnie ®ude on Aug 25, 2008 13:52:16 GMT -5
Welp, knocking up sluts aside, I'll make a character when I can.
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Post by jjrev609 on Aug 25, 2008 20:15:37 GMT -5
two slots left
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XenoD
b47713-w0rN g4n7z3r
1st of a New Wave
"Ugh"
Posts: 459
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Post by XenoD on Aug 25, 2008 20:25:37 GMT -5
Slots? Or Sluts?
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Post by Benry on Aug 25, 2008 20:28:43 GMT -5
what difference does it make? There are still two left for grabs...
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Post by jjrev609 on Aug 25, 2008 20:46:29 GMT -5
stop with this nonsense. I will not say it again
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Post by Benry on Aug 26, 2008 17:51:16 GMT -5
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Post by jjrev609 on Aug 26, 2008 17:52:15 GMT -5
he has hax...
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Post by Benry on Aug 26, 2008 17:52:55 GMT -5
i'm still saying it...
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Post by ®onnie ®ude on Aug 26, 2008 17:53:12 GMT -5
I was wondering at 1st how'd me c-box get up there xD...
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Post by jjrev609 on Aug 26, 2008 21:45:12 GMT -5
I guess we'll start 2morrow. I don't know what time but most likely 2morrow unless something comes up and the one slot is still open
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Post by ®onnie ®ude on Aug 26, 2008 22:12:32 GMT -5
Just make another NPC. Killing ppl as a mod is fun and that's what makes NPCs GREAT!
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Post by jjrev609 on Aug 29, 2008 21:58:16 GMT -5
i'm lookin at monday for my next update
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Post by Benry on Aug 31, 2008 15:56:45 GMT -5
do i get to post a reaction to ronnie's post?
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Post by jjrev609 on Aug 31, 2008 16:03:12 GMT -5
I'ma go with no
edit: I'll get to work on the update tonight too
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Post by jjrev609 on Aug 31, 2008 22:03:38 GMT -5
hey all you guys that have dialogue start in the middle of a paragraph can u plz start a new one when ur character is speaking or thinking for the first time because that's proper writing form and it's easier for me to find all your character's speech and thoughts.
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Kaito
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Post by Kaito on Aug 31, 2008 23:28:51 GMT -5
Do what?
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Post by jjrev609 on Aug 31, 2008 23:33:49 GMT -5
let me make it real simple.
first time character speaks or think = start new paragragh
makes it a whole lot easier for me
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Kaito
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It's Kaito-Kid!
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Post by Kaito on Aug 31, 2008 23:37:29 GMT -5
I would........but im to lazy.
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XenoD
b47713-w0rN g4n7z3r
1st of a New Wave
"Ugh"
Posts: 459
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Post by XenoD on Aug 31, 2008 23:40:19 GMT -5
Space it out.
Turn this: I like walking to the store and buyin' me some smokes. I then like to run over little kids with a bicycle and then rob their dead asses. Then I find their homes and burn their treehouses down.
Into this: I like walking to the Store and buying me some smokes.
I then like to run over little kids with a bicycle and then rob their dead asses.
Then I find their homes and burn their treehouses down.
That's what he wants.
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Post by ®onnie ®ude on Sept 1, 2008 0:45:31 GMT -5
Space it out. Turn this: I like walking to the store and buyin' me some smokes. I then like to run over little kids with a bicycle and then rob their dead asses. Then I find their homes and burn their treehouses down. Into this: I like walking to the Store and buying me some smokes. I then like to run over little kids with a bicycle and then rob their dead asses. Then I find their homes and burn their treehouses down. That's what he wants. No. It isn't. He wants you not to do this... Example:The boy eats shit. "Mmm shit tastes good," said the boy. The boy eats more of it and shows his friends. As he showed him he thought, 'I wonder if they eat shit too?' He then asked them, "Do you want to eat some shit?" As he asked this he kept eating shit, because shit tasted good to him. He wants you to do this... Example:The boy eats shit and doesn't mind announcing that fact. "Mmm shit tastes good," said the boy. The boy eats more of it and shows his friends. As he showed him he thought, 'I wonder if they eat shit too?' He then asked them, "Do you want to eat some shit?" As he asked that, he kept eating shit, because shit tasted good to him. Notice how none of the dialog interferes w/ what the character's action was. According to what J's saying, you can go as far as having a sentence to a paragraph of actions as long as it isn't in a cluster-fuck w/ dialog. He wants them seperated by putting them each in their own paragraph.
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Post by Benry on Sept 1, 2008 6:30:49 GMT -5
HELLO! Nobody seems to notice the shit-eating boy?? wtf lol
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XenoD
b47713-w0rN g4n7z3r
1st of a New Wave
"Ugh"
Posts: 459
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Post by XenoD on Sept 1, 2008 15:40:36 GMT -5
Holy Fried Shit on a Shit Sandwhich with Shit Toppings!
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Post by jjrev609 on Sept 1, 2008 15:59:47 GMT -5
*sigh* update will be up around 9 or 10 pm eastern
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XenoD
b47713-w0rN g4n7z3r
1st of a New Wave
"Ugh"
Posts: 459
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Post by XenoD on Sept 1, 2008 16:31:58 GMT -5
I thought this was Redemption?
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Post by jjrev609 on Sept 1, 2008 17:07:17 GMT -5
the fuck does that have to do with anything?
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XenoD
b47713-w0rN g4n7z3r
1st of a New Wave
"Ugh"
Posts: 459
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Post by XenoD on Sept 1, 2008 17:16:49 GMT -5
the fuck does that have to do with anything? *sigh* update will be up around 9 or 10 pm easternMeant to be funny.
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Post by Dane on Sept 2, 2008 15:58:43 GMT -5
So, in the case of Xeno's and Luke's characters, since they speak English, can the Japanese speaking people understand them?
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