Post by raith on Mar 21, 2007 18:00:37 GMT -5
I started this Fan Fic awhile ago, so I decided to see if it was any good. 5 Episodes are done so far, but I will post those only if this gets some decient reviews.
Episode 1 - New and Final Day
"Taitsu! Taitsu wait up!" Yelled a voice from the back of the hall, as the sounds of footsteps echo throughout the comfined space.
A teenager standing at 6'1 with dirty blonde hair cascading down to just above his shoulders turns around to spot a young girl dressed in a school girl uniform, with brown hair flowing down half way down her back pulled back in a ponytail. Taitsu crossed his arms and watched as she approached but, she fell forward. Taitsu quickly reached over and caught the girl by her stomache, but moved his hand up so it was placed upon her breast.
"Uh... Taitsu.." The girl mumbled as she looked down at his hand and Taitsu glanced down before removing his hand leaving the girl to stand their uncomfortably.
"Oops, Sorry Senza... Hand must have slipped." Taitsu said as he grinned twistedly at Senza before turning his back and began down the hall again.
Senza stood their for a moment, before quickly shaking her head and running over to Taitsu's side. Taitsu turned the corner before Senza could say anything and he entered into a small apartment. Taitsu tossed his backpack onto the bed, and Senza quickly pushed her way in and stomped her foot on the floor to get Taitsu's attention.
"The Yakuza will be here any minute ya know!" Cried Senza as Taitsu made his way over to his dresser and quickly searched through it, pushing clothes out of the way to reveal a handgun already loaded.
"Why do you think I'm here, ya stupid broad!" Yelled Taitsu before grabbing onto Senza's shirt and pushing her away and onto his own bed. Taitsu looked at her for a moment as if concerned, but just shook his head quickly slipping the gun into his pants and rushing out of the room.
Taitsu blasted into the hallway to hear the voices of four men, down the hall. Taitsu quickly looked around and began to sprint down the hallway making headway toward the staircase hearing behind him Senza screaming his name and run again and again.
"Shit! Shut the hell up Senza!" Taitsu thought, but didn't take the time to turn around and tell her. Instead he made his way to the stairs and hooked onto the railing to begin up them, he panting trying to catch his breath.
At the top of the stairs, Taitsu reached yet another hallway and he shook his head in dismay and began to sprint down this hallway as well. Taitsu grabbed onto his side, for he was beginning to get a cramp but, was stopped in mid run by an old lady with white curly hair making her way out of an apartment right in his path. Taitsu slammed into the old lady forcing them both down to the floor.
"Watch where your going you old hag!" Yelled Taitsu as he rose to his feet and looked at the old lady holding her arm which was bent backwards and dangling frail in off her shoulder.
"Please... Call an ambulance.." Cried the old lady and Taitsu took a step toward her, but was snapped out of it by the voices of the men behind him and he once again began to sprint down the hallway.
"Your on your own lady!" Taitsu thought in his head and glanced back to spot the lady glaring a cold glare at him. Taitsu looked worried, but only for just a moment and he continued down the hallway breathing heavily.
Taitsu turned the corner to reveal nothing more than a large balcony forming out from the building. Taitsu ran a hand through his hand worried, and looked down the hallway to spot three men dressed in black jumpsuits along with a man dressed in a black button up shirt and black khakis his eyes covered by sunglasses making his way down the hallway.
"Shit! Now what! Shit, shit, shit!" Taitsu mumbled as he began to pace around the balcony and turned to the corner in which the Yakuza would come from, and pulled the handgun from his pants to hold it up to the corner panting and feeling his heart beat fast within his chest.
"I'll fucking shoot you bastards!" Taitsu yelled and the three jumpsuit Yakuza's stepped out from behind the corner to face him. The Yakuza were all armed with Uzi Pistol's excluding the man with the sunglasses who stood behind them with a twisted grin across his face.
"Come on, boy. You know if you shoot that gun, you'll be mowed down so quick your brother will feel it down there in hell." The sunglasses Yakuza said, as he continued to grin at Taitsu.
Taitsu held the gun up at the sunglasses Yakuza angered by the comment about his brother. Taitsu's hand shook as he watched the Yakuza's fingers hover over the triggers. The sunglasses Yakuza grinned and cocked his head to the side before stepping out infront of the jumpsuit Yakuza's.
"Pay Nomimora the money!" Yelled one of the jumpsuit Yakuzas as they took a step forward as well. Taitsu backed up a few paces as he placed his finger on the trigger. Nomimora lifted his hand up to signal the Yakuza not to shoot and grinned at Taitsu.
"Your Mother couldn't have saved anyway... Your nothing but an orphan... Come on Orphan, shoot me... if you have the balls." Said Nomimora as Taitsu began to shake with anger and was about to pull the trigger but, was stopped by the sight of Senza leaping out from behind the Yakuza and tackling Nomimora to the floor.
The jumpsuit Yakuza without hesitation turned and held the gun to Senza. The one of the left shot first, and the bullet shot right through her left shoulder, blood spilling down onto the floor and running down her arm. Next came the one of the right who shot her in the spine and the blood began to leak out of both her back and her stomache as a puddle of blood began to form around her. Last was the one standing behind Senza who held the Uzi Pistol up and shot Senza directley in the skull, bone and brain fragments spraying onto the floor accompanied by blood.
Taitsu's jaw dropped open and he screamed "No!" before pulling the trigger at one of the Yakuza but, being desperate to shoot was way off and before he could fire again, Nomimora reached into the back of his pants and pulled out a Mini Uzi and began to shoot into Taitsu. The bullets rammed through Taitsu as he stumbled backwards, as the bullets shot right through him and blood splattered onto the railing of the balcony. Taitsu stumbled into the balcony railing and flipped over it and he fell from the top floor of the 5th story apartment building.
"So this is how it ends huh? Damn, I really wanted to see if I could get Senza into bed before I died. To bad she died first. Ah, well. Can't win em all." The thoughts raced through Taitsu's head as he fell from the building and he felt his body slam into the floor.
Taitsu kept his eyes closed for a moment, before noticing his back wasn't against the hard feeling of concrete from the sidewalk but, the feeling of smooth wood. Taitsu groaned quietly before hearing voices around him, of both men and woman.
"Who is this one, he's a bit rough on the edges!" "The girl is kinda hot. I would like to take her into the back and do some crazy shit to her!" "How do you think these two got here?"
Taitsu kept his eyes closed, but reached up to his chest and felt around for the gunshot wounds but, felt nothing. Taitsu began to breath heavily as his eyes shot open and he thought "Where the hell am I?!"
Episode 1 - New and Final Day
"Taitsu! Taitsu wait up!" Yelled a voice from the back of the hall, as the sounds of footsteps echo throughout the comfined space.
A teenager standing at 6'1 with dirty blonde hair cascading down to just above his shoulders turns around to spot a young girl dressed in a school girl uniform, with brown hair flowing down half way down her back pulled back in a ponytail. Taitsu crossed his arms and watched as she approached but, she fell forward. Taitsu quickly reached over and caught the girl by her stomache, but moved his hand up so it was placed upon her breast.
"Uh... Taitsu.." The girl mumbled as she looked down at his hand and Taitsu glanced down before removing his hand leaving the girl to stand their uncomfortably.
"Oops, Sorry Senza... Hand must have slipped." Taitsu said as he grinned twistedly at Senza before turning his back and began down the hall again.
Senza stood their for a moment, before quickly shaking her head and running over to Taitsu's side. Taitsu turned the corner before Senza could say anything and he entered into a small apartment. Taitsu tossed his backpack onto the bed, and Senza quickly pushed her way in and stomped her foot on the floor to get Taitsu's attention.
"The Yakuza will be here any minute ya know!" Cried Senza as Taitsu made his way over to his dresser and quickly searched through it, pushing clothes out of the way to reveal a handgun already loaded.
"Why do you think I'm here, ya stupid broad!" Yelled Taitsu before grabbing onto Senza's shirt and pushing her away and onto his own bed. Taitsu looked at her for a moment as if concerned, but just shook his head quickly slipping the gun into his pants and rushing out of the room.
Taitsu blasted into the hallway to hear the voices of four men, down the hall. Taitsu quickly looked around and began to sprint down the hallway making headway toward the staircase hearing behind him Senza screaming his name and run again and again.
"Shit! Shut the hell up Senza!" Taitsu thought, but didn't take the time to turn around and tell her. Instead he made his way to the stairs and hooked onto the railing to begin up them, he panting trying to catch his breath.
At the top of the stairs, Taitsu reached yet another hallway and he shook his head in dismay and began to sprint down this hallway as well. Taitsu grabbed onto his side, for he was beginning to get a cramp but, was stopped in mid run by an old lady with white curly hair making her way out of an apartment right in his path. Taitsu slammed into the old lady forcing them both down to the floor.
"Watch where your going you old hag!" Yelled Taitsu as he rose to his feet and looked at the old lady holding her arm which was bent backwards and dangling frail in off her shoulder.
"Please... Call an ambulance.." Cried the old lady and Taitsu took a step toward her, but was snapped out of it by the voices of the men behind him and he once again began to sprint down the hallway.
"Your on your own lady!" Taitsu thought in his head and glanced back to spot the lady glaring a cold glare at him. Taitsu looked worried, but only for just a moment and he continued down the hallway breathing heavily.
Taitsu turned the corner to reveal nothing more than a large balcony forming out from the building. Taitsu ran a hand through his hand worried, and looked down the hallway to spot three men dressed in black jumpsuits along with a man dressed in a black button up shirt and black khakis his eyes covered by sunglasses making his way down the hallway.
"Shit! Now what! Shit, shit, shit!" Taitsu mumbled as he began to pace around the balcony and turned to the corner in which the Yakuza would come from, and pulled the handgun from his pants to hold it up to the corner panting and feeling his heart beat fast within his chest.
"I'll fucking shoot you bastards!" Taitsu yelled and the three jumpsuit Yakuza's stepped out from behind the corner to face him. The Yakuza were all armed with Uzi Pistol's excluding the man with the sunglasses who stood behind them with a twisted grin across his face.
"Come on, boy. You know if you shoot that gun, you'll be mowed down so quick your brother will feel it down there in hell." The sunglasses Yakuza said, as he continued to grin at Taitsu.
Taitsu held the gun up at the sunglasses Yakuza angered by the comment about his brother. Taitsu's hand shook as he watched the Yakuza's fingers hover over the triggers. The sunglasses Yakuza grinned and cocked his head to the side before stepping out infront of the jumpsuit Yakuza's.
"Pay Nomimora the money!" Yelled one of the jumpsuit Yakuzas as they took a step forward as well. Taitsu backed up a few paces as he placed his finger on the trigger. Nomimora lifted his hand up to signal the Yakuza not to shoot and grinned at Taitsu.
"Your Mother couldn't have saved anyway... Your nothing but an orphan... Come on Orphan, shoot me... if you have the balls." Said Nomimora as Taitsu began to shake with anger and was about to pull the trigger but, was stopped by the sight of Senza leaping out from behind the Yakuza and tackling Nomimora to the floor.
The jumpsuit Yakuza without hesitation turned and held the gun to Senza. The one of the left shot first, and the bullet shot right through her left shoulder, blood spilling down onto the floor and running down her arm. Next came the one of the right who shot her in the spine and the blood began to leak out of both her back and her stomache as a puddle of blood began to form around her. Last was the one standing behind Senza who held the Uzi Pistol up and shot Senza directley in the skull, bone and brain fragments spraying onto the floor accompanied by blood.
Taitsu's jaw dropped open and he screamed "No!" before pulling the trigger at one of the Yakuza but, being desperate to shoot was way off and before he could fire again, Nomimora reached into the back of his pants and pulled out a Mini Uzi and began to shoot into Taitsu. The bullets rammed through Taitsu as he stumbled backwards, as the bullets shot right through him and blood splattered onto the railing of the balcony. Taitsu stumbled into the balcony railing and flipped over it and he fell from the top floor of the 5th story apartment building.
"So this is how it ends huh? Damn, I really wanted to see if I could get Senza into bed before I died. To bad she died first. Ah, well. Can't win em all." The thoughts raced through Taitsu's head as he fell from the building and he felt his body slam into the floor.
Taitsu kept his eyes closed for a moment, before noticing his back wasn't against the hard feeling of concrete from the sidewalk but, the feeling of smooth wood. Taitsu groaned quietly before hearing voices around him, of both men and woman.
"Who is this one, he's a bit rough on the edges!" "The girl is kinda hot. I would like to take her into the back and do some crazy shit to her!" "How do you think these two got here?"
Taitsu kept his eyes closed, but reached up to his chest and felt around for the gunshot wounds but, felt nothing. Taitsu began to breath heavily as his eyes shot open and he thought "Where the hell am I?!"