Post by gattsu on Aug 31, 2008 13:54:02 GMT -5
Example: Title wouldn't let me fit it. I could do normal Gantz scenery to, but Forever hasn't really seemed to follow the rules... Ack, nvm you must have added some rules that every project I've been has broken. Just take this an example of prose then. Meh, I doubt anyone will respond to this, but I just realized there's now six projects, so it seems fine.
The dissident howl of the trains jittery wheels grinding on the rusted tracks reverberated through the ramshackle Apartment Building 24-B's structure as if a giant was beating on it with an over sized stick. The city light's flashed through it's cracked windows through the gaps in the train cars as if gasping for air.
You could imagine this was the kind of place where someone could easily be murdered. No one could hear you scream, and if they could, they wouldn't care.
Every apartment in this building was the same. You would enter through a dark, barely lit hallway, and see a kitchen, a door, a ceiling fan with a broken blade, and the living room. The kitchen with cheap white broken tiles strewn across the floor. The kitchen with it's appliances covered in cracks, stains, and usually an empty syringe laced with heroine lying by the sink. A door with the knob, and hinges falling off. The living room which was also meant to be the bedroom looked as if it had been built by laborers that were half drunk, and was slovenly covered with decrepit floorboards that were put in sometime in the mid-1940's. The walls were always a peeling yellow. You could smell the heavy scent of lead paint drifting care-free through the air. Like dust you could see it as the lights of the apartment flickered on and off... wondering with an absent mind if you'd payed the electricity bill.
Every apartment in this building was the same. Every apartment but one... the one that contained a big black metallic ball that flashed in big green letters.
Hello, and how are you doing?
Welcome to hell!
The text flashed for a minute before being replaced by a different message.
Just kidding@!@
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This is how my opening post would like as a mod. Obviously it would be modified in the middle to show the Gantzers teleporting into the room, and also would start out with one Veteran NPC character who would probably be ryo (with his personality modified to reflect his time in Gantz). I not really sure how to modify text the way Gantz does, I can learn though.
I would be applying for forever. Tell me what you think. Critique
I also suck at map-making and drawing... if someone could help me with that though...
I'll apply if I get reply's that this is alright. If you want an example of how I would post someone talking, or a battle scene I can do that too.
p.s. would of revealed sink, but I'm not sure where to put it.
The dissident howl of the trains jittery wheels grinding on the rusted tracks reverberated through the ramshackle Apartment Building 24-B's structure as if a giant was beating on it with an over sized stick. The city light's flashed through it's cracked windows through the gaps in the train cars as if gasping for air.
You could imagine this was the kind of place where someone could easily be murdered. No one could hear you scream, and if they could, they wouldn't care.
Every apartment in this building was the same. You would enter through a dark, barely lit hallway, and see a kitchen, a door, a ceiling fan with a broken blade, and the living room. The kitchen with cheap white broken tiles strewn across the floor. The kitchen with it's appliances covered in cracks, stains, and usually an empty syringe laced with heroine lying by the sink. A door with the knob, and hinges falling off. The living room which was also meant to be the bedroom looked as if it had been built by laborers that were half drunk, and was slovenly covered with decrepit floorboards that were put in sometime in the mid-1940's. The walls were always a peeling yellow. You could smell the heavy scent of lead paint drifting care-free through the air. Like dust you could see it as the lights of the apartment flickered on and off... wondering with an absent mind if you'd payed the electricity bill.
Every apartment in this building was the same. Every apartment but one... the one that contained a big black metallic ball that flashed in big green letters.
Hello, and how are you doing?
Welcome to hell!
The text flashed for a minute before being replaced by a different message.
Just kidding@!@
_____________________________________________________________
This is how my opening post would like as a mod. Obviously it would be modified in the middle to show the Gantzers teleporting into the room, and also would start out with one Veteran NPC character who would probably be ryo (with his personality modified to reflect his time in Gantz). I not really sure how to modify text the way Gantz does, I can learn though.
I would be applying for forever. Tell me what you think. Critique
I also suck at map-making and drawing... if someone could help me with that though...
I'll apply if I get reply's that this is alright. If you want an example of how I would post someone talking, or a battle scene I can do that too.
p.s. would of revealed sink, but I'm not sure where to put it.
