Lucia "Lulu" Cahato (NPC)

[sinfulxbaby]

Project: Metropolis Project

Name: Lucia "Lulu" Cahato

Age: 18

Gender: female

Sexual Preference: bi-sexual

Race: half Japanese and half American

Height: 5'8

Weight: 135lbs

Hair Color: black

Eye Color: sapphire blue

Language(s): English and Japanese

Career: Is your character employed? not yet

If so, Answer the Following:

• What is your character's profession? n/a
  
• Does your character get paid well? n/a
  
• Does your character like their job? n/a
  
• Does your character like their boss? n/a
  
• How long has your character been employed? n/a
  
• Does your character work in the City, a Farm, a tourist Island or the Suburbs? n/a
  

Education: Is your character currently enrolled in school? graduated
If so, Answer the Following:

• Does your character attend school in the city or the suburbs? n/a
  
• Does your character like school? n/a
  
• Does your character pay attention in class? n/a
  
• Does your character get good grades? n/a
  
• Does your character have a romantic relationship w/ any of their peers? n/a
  
• Does your character do any extra curricular activities? n/a
  
• Is your character popular? n/a
  
• Is your character considered a bully? n/a
  

Inventory: She carries two katana's on her back and Shuriken on a special belt around her hips

One Strength: Lulu is a very gifted swordswoman, she had studied ninja techniques in a school in a small village far from Tokyo.

Remember to Answer all that apply:

• How does this strength effect your character physically? She is strong physically due to all of her training.
  
• How does this strength effect your character mentally? Shes very confident in her swordsmanship and believes shes best with her swords rather than hand-to-hand combat
  
• In what way would this benefit others working alongside your character? Because she tends to help her allies when their in need.
  
• In what way would this NOT benefit others working alongside your character? She likes to work alone when shes fighting
  

One Weakness: She gets unnerved by firearms due to the death of her younger brother

Remember to Answer all that apply:

• How does this weakness effect your character physically? it makes her shake slightly
  
• How does this weakness effect your character mentally? her mentality had stayed the same she just begins to get flashbacks
  
• In what way would this benefit others working alongside your character? her weakness enables her allies with the more powerful weapons to fight
  
• In what way would this NOT benefit others working alongside your character? because of the flashbacks she pauses for a few seconds.
  

Appearance:

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[li]Does your character have a preferred style of dress? she goes with her own styles, she usually wears her ninja guise then dresses like a normal rocker teenager
[/li][li]Does your character appear intimidating, average or preferably approachable at first glance? Shes very approachable and it shows by how much she smiles.
[/li][li] Is your character attractive, average or ugly? shes pretty attractive
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Personality: Despite her looks she is very friendly and kind but she is very serious when it comes to battle.

Remember to Answer all that apply:

• Is your character shy or are they outgoing? shes a bit outgoing
  
• Is your character a leader, a follower or a balance of the two? a balance of the two
  

Background: Lulu was born in Tokyo, Japan. Her mother and father had been abusive being part of the tradition. She eventually went to train at a dojo and became very skilled with her katana's and shuriken.

Answer the Following:

• What brings your character to the City of Metropolis? How did they arrive in the city? She recently moved to the city herself due to wanting to get away from her parents. She also hopes to overcome her memories of her brothers murder
  
• Does your character live with parents, guardians, a husband/wife/kids, a roommate/friend or by themselves. by herself
  
• Does your character live in the city, on a farm, in the wilderness, or in the suburbs? wilderness
  
• Has your character ever gone to jail? What did they do? no
  
• Does your character have a warrant for their arrest? What did they do? n/a
  
• Is your character a member of a gang? nope
  
• Has your character ever killed anyone? yes, during a battle she had been in with her brother and she had to kill to protect her brother
  
• Has your character ever witnessed death? She had witnessed her younger brothers death
  
• Does your character have experience w/ melee combat of any kind

[/color] no
[/li][li] Does your character have experience w/ any firearms? no
[/li][li] Does your character have experience w/ driving a vehicle? yes, before she left Japan her friend had taught her how to drive a car.
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Cause of Death: She ends up dying due to battle fighting the man who had killed her brother


Note: She became a swords woman because she wanted to be able to protect herself and not be a coward, she joined the dojo as a way to get away from her parents and ended up staying because she enjoyed the training but it was mainly so she could also protect her brother. Because she had become so skilled she had taken on the head of a rich family, after she won they vowed to get revenge on her. So their revenge was taking her younger brothers life and she vowed to avenged her brother

[®onnie ®ude]

This character has the potential to be very good imo, but a lot of her past, reasons for taking up the sword and her death conflict w/ one another. Its like she may have a reason to train and learn the art of using a sword, but your not really telling me why. I suggest taking the better aspects of her background and pulling more from them.

Here's What I found interesting about your character's past that I think needs to be elaborated more on...

• She has a brother that got shot.
  
• Her parents abused her.
  
• She fled from Tokyo to Metropolis Project.
  
• She trained at a dojo.
  
• Her brother's death still haunts her.
  
• She has a friend in Tokyo that taught her how to drive.
  

I also believe that her death seems odd seeing as to how she doesn't have a reason to fight or get killed by anyone unless you give me something to work with.

However, other then that this is a great character, but it needs some more work before I can accept it.

Edit: You also need to use the fonts from the template.

[sinfulxbaby]

Okay there, I'm sorry Ronnie.
Yesterday I was abit out of it so i wasn't thinking correctly -_-

[®onnie ®ude]

NP, I fixed the minor formating issues you still had. Just so you know next time, its so much easier to just quote my template and plug in the information instead of copying, pasting, plugging in the data and then trying to make it look like the format that's supposed to be used.