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Post by Defectron on May 11, 2013 1:15:20 GMT -5
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Post by ®onnie ®ude on Jul 23, 2013 10:29:22 GMT -5
I actually give this comic a stamp of approval. The drawing is actually really well done and there's a lot of color. The story itself is simple enough, but it seems as if there's a lot more story that needs to unravel. I personally think its the most rational and sensible story that Defectron has ever told, because Project Southern was nuts.
Do the guy a favor and check out his comic, and leave a comment.
Can't wait to read the rest Defectron!
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Post by Defectron on Jul 23, 2013 11:33:25 GMT -5
The story itself is simple enough, but it seems as if there's a lot more story that needs to unravel. I personally think its the most rational and sensible story that Defectron has ever told, because Project Southern was nuts. I'm saving this quote and will be posting it if if/when I make a reviews section. When I was first making a pitch for this story to people trying to find collborators to help with it someone told me it would be easier to do a webcomic about a talking stapler. Oh well showed him, no promises that a talking stapler won't show up at some point though. Some characters that will show up in this actually were prototyped in rpg's I did on this site and other places, though I refined them alot since this is a more professional story. Here's the character design for an upcoming villain, lets see if anyone remembers the original idea behind this character. imageshack.us/photo/my-images/5/a3xe.jpg/ |
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Post by ®onnie ®ude on Jul 23, 2013 15:17:39 GMT -5
Yeah, one thing I know for certain it's hard writing for a niche audience unless it is something that you truly do enjoy. I'd be happy to help in anyway, even if its just constructive criticism.
As for that picture, if it's not Aiko, I'm going to guess that it might be Pavarti. I'm leaning more towards Aiko considering I remember her biting some dudes finger off while he was eating a bowl of ramen.
One things for certain, you gotta bring back that goddamn tree stomp alien that single-handily owned our entire Gantz Team in Project Southern. Someone has to get choked out by it and someone else needs to bite it's branch, resulting in them being electrocuted.
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Post by Defectron on Jul 23, 2013 16:09:45 GMT -5
Nope, that character is sort of loosely based on the boss of hunt # 3 or #s, forget which but I think it was 2. We'll also be seeing a character based off of the box aliens. But yeah I could bring back the tree stump alien in some way, though if I do it won't be til much later in the story. Aiko isn't directly going into this, though certain aspects of her character did sort of inspire one of the villains in this, Platina Entropy. imageshack.us/photo/my-images/541/sbmu.jpg/She might not look too intimidating here, but she's one of the scarier characters that will appear in this. I don't really need any help directly right now, but one thing you could do to help is post links to the comic in any places you might go in the internet, I'm kind of trying to get its name out there right now. Constructive criticism is always welcome too. |
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