Post by jjrev609 on Jun 8, 2006 20:56:10 GMT -5
If you haven't read "An Example of Bad Parenting" I suggest you do to understand some things in this story. If you have already then you would get the title hopefully.
JPimpin had set foot in Japan for the first time in years. He had missed Japan, but he also hated it. He knew he had no where else to go but back to his father. Feeling uneasy aboput seeing his father and telling him what had happened seemed to be more of a challenge than the gang he fought. JPimpin somehow found the remote ninja village where he had grown up.
"Great, I'm home again." JPimpin said to himself. He couldn't believe how much the village had changed. He still knew which building his father was in, for it was still the biggest building in the village. "Time to face my fears." JPimpin inhaled deeply and stepped inside. The building was empty except for one man kneeling in front of a huge tapestry. JPimpin kneeled down not to far from behind the man. "Father, I have returned."
The man scoffed. "You call me father, but yet I have no son." the man says sternly. JPimpin sat in silence before speaking. "Mom's dead." Silence again fell upon the two. The man stood up and faced JPimpin. "Saizoru, how could you let her die!" A single tear drop fell from the man's eye to the ground.
"I did not let her die, it wasn't my fault!" JPimpin stood up to who he thought was his father. "Your just mad because she took me and you didn't get to have your way with me." Jpimpin stood eye to eye with him now. For a long time they stood ther staring into each others eyes waiting for the other to blink first. JPimpin's father turned away.
"I will train you now, for you will be my most dangerous weapon." His voice now serious. "I'll train as my own weapon, not yours, on the condition that you do not call him Saizoru, my name is JPimpin." He then leaves and heads outside. "Ha JPimpin is a strange name, but I guess it'll do."
Training now made training when he was younger look like child's play, which it was. During training he had met his new friends. They were Takashi, Sai, Naru, and Isao. Takashi was the typical fat boy, always hungry, lazy, and can't run too fast, but on the inside of that blob of fat was a dedicated ninja. Sai was the smart ass of the group, he always had to have the last word in arguments, but because he's a ninja he can watch himslef most of the time. Naru was the scared one, he would always wimp out or ask why thay had to do something extreme. Last but not least, Isao. Even though she was the only girl that they befriended she didn't really mind. Even though she was consider a girl she fought almost as good as the boys. It would be these five young ninja that would be known as the most dangerous in the clan.
This little group of 'hoodlums', as JPimpin's father put it, had there own uniqe style that made them dangerous, feared, and sometimes questioned. Everytime they went on a mission they would perform a little, but loud ritual of them standing in a circle and bouncing to the beat of very loud rap music. They felt the music helped them get hyped and ready for their challenges that were ahead of them.
One particular mission would actually prove to be the end for one of them. Like always they were going to perform their ritual when JPimpin's father interupted it. "Don't engage in that useless act of yours." JPimpin's father ordered. "Dad, with all do respect, go fuck yourself." JPimpin's friends looked at him in shock. He had finally said it. It had felt good to disrespect his father. They continued with the mission. All was going well. The gruop of five decided to split up but Isao stayed a little longer after the other left.
"Promise me you won't die." Isao sounded a little worried. JPimpin saw a couple tears come to her eyes. He came close to her and embraced her. They were staring in eachother's eyes. Isao tried to look away but JPimpin pushed her face softly to meet his and he kissed her lovingly. "That's my promise to you, I will not die until one of us kills each other." JPimpin said softly while slowly caressing her face. they then parted ways, but JPimpin's promise would soon be broken. he was scouting the area when he had layed eyes on a gorgous girl. She was changing in her room. JPimpin couldn't help himself but stare at her body, it was so perfect. He was so caught up in her body he didn't notice a trip wire next to him. He leaned over to get a better view and then, SNAP. The trip wire broke and several kunai shot out from nowhere hitting JPimpin everywhere. He felt great pain and fatigue. He fell from his scouting branch to the ground. As he lay there bleeding to death he thought of the one thing that could calm him, the sight of him and Isao living in peace together. With his last breath he whispered something for him to remember. "I'm coming to see you Mom."
JPimpin had set foot in Japan for the first time in years. He had missed Japan, but he also hated it. He knew he had no where else to go but back to his father. Feeling uneasy aboput seeing his father and telling him what had happened seemed to be more of a challenge than the gang he fought. JPimpin somehow found the remote ninja village where he had grown up.
"Great, I'm home again." JPimpin said to himself. He couldn't believe how much the village had changed. He still knew which building his father was in, for it was still the biggest building in the village. "Time to face my fears." JPimpin inhaled deeply and stepped inside. The building was empty except for one man kneeling in front of a huge tapestry. JPimpin kneeled down not to far from behind the man. "Father, I have returned."
The man scoffed. "You call me father, but yet I have no son." the man says sternly. JPimpin sat in silence before speaking. "Mom's dead." Silence again fell upon the two. The man stood up and faced JPimpin. "Saizoru, how could you let her die!" A single tear drop fell from the man's eye to the ground.
"I did not let her die, it wasn't my fault!" JPimpin stood up to who he thought was his father. "Your just mad because she took me and you didn't get to have your way with me." Jpimpin stood eye to eye with him now. For a long time they stood ther staring into each others eyes waiting for the other to blink first. JPimpin's father turned away.
"I will train you now, for you will be my most dangerous weapon." His voice now serious. "I'll train as my own weapon, not yours, on the condition that you do not call him Saizoru, my name is JPimpin." He then leaves and heads outside. "Ha JPimpin is a strange name, but I guess it'll do."
Training now made training when he was younger look like child's play, which it was. During training he had met his new friends. They were Takashi, Sai, Naru, and Isao. Takashi was the typical fat boy, always hungry, lazy, and can't run too fast, but on the inside of that blob of fat was a dedicated ninja. Sai was the smart ass of the group, he always had to have the last word in arguments, but because he's a ninja he can watch himslef most of the time. Naru was the scared one, he would always wimp out or ask why thay had to do something extreme. Last but not least, Isao. Even though she was the only girl that they befriended she didn't really mind. Even though she was consider a girl she fought almost as good as the boys. It would be these five young ninja that would be known as the most dangerous in the clan.
This little group of 'hoodlums', as JPimpin's father put it, had there own uniqe style that made them dangerous, feared, and sometimes questioned. Everytime they went on a mission they would perform a little, but loud ritual of them standing in a circle and bouncing to the beat of very loud rap music. They felt the music helped them get hyped and ready for their challenges that were ahead of them.
One particular mission would actually prove to be the end for one of them. Like always they were going to perform their ritual when JPimpin's father interupted it. "Don't engage in that useless act of yours." JPimpin's father ordered. "Dad, with all do respect, go fuck yourself." JPimpin's friends looked at him in shock. He had finally said it. It had felt good to disrespect his father. They continued with the mission. All was going well. The gruop of five decided to split up but Isao stayed a little longer after the other left.
"Promise me you won't die." Isao sounded a little worried. JPimpin saw a couple tears come to her eyes. He came close to her and embraced her. They were staring in eachother's eyes. Isao tried to look away but JPimpin pushed her face softly to meet his and he kissed her lovingly. "That's my promise to you, I will not die until one of us kills each other." JPimpin said softly while slowly caressing her face. they then parted ways, but JPimpin's promise would soon be broken. he was scouting the area when he had layed eyes on a gorgous girl. She was changing in her room. JPimpin couldn't help himself but stare at her body, it was so perfect. He was so caught up in her body he didn't notice a trip wire next to him. He leaned over to get a better view and then, SNAP. The trip wire broke and several kunai shot out from nowhere hitting JPimpin everywhere. He felt great pain and fatigue. He fell from his scouting branch to the ground. As he lay there bleeding to death he thought of the one thing that could calm him, the sight of him and Isao living in peace together. With his last breath he whispered something for him to remember. "I'm coming to see you Mom."
